en låt jag skrev idag inte så bra men

I feel so alone no one hear me scream
Sometimes I wonder when you stand by my side.
Why did you leave?
In this cold and pathetic world isn’t anything going right.
I don’t know what to do.
Please can you be therefore me just this time.
I thought I did know you
But I was wrong
So wrong

It´s like a hellhole I’m living.
Why am I here?
Living I fear.
Why where you there?
Making me scared
Heart of stone, Hitting hard.
Blood falling down.


We laugh together.
You made me smile.
But that was then.
Please come back as you where
I don’t wanna live in fear I just want you there

så vad tycker ni?

en låt som jag skrev typ en månad efter att min katt dog sen så e en del om min farfar

Like angels are flying
Like birds are flying through the sky
Do I know that you are there somewhere.
Where you are I wonder still today.
Are you there? Are you here?
Why did you fly away?

To stars to the heaven that still believe in.
I just want to find you some day.
I want to see you again.
Just to hear your name makes me cry like a fool.
I want you to know that you’re still in my heart.

I remember the days I spent with you.
It’s a loving moment that I never forget
The feeling to know that you’re in a better place now

To stars to the heaven that still believe in.
I just want to find you some day.
I want to see you again.
Just to hear your name makes me cry like a fool.
I want you to know that you’re still in my heart.

I love you and I will never forget you
Forget you
I know you up there somewhere and one day will I find you

vad tycks?

en låt jag skrev nyss

Stars are falling down the sky
Make a wish before it’s too late
The dark shy is lightening up by a beautiful star.
The most beautiful I’ve ever seen.
Hearts gets broken.
Tears are falling down.
To the deepest chasm.

Hold on hard in everything that means something
Cause someday you’re going to lose it.
Lose it all.
Lose control.
Fucking lose control

You are maybe thinking that it is going to last forever.
But hearts get broken and people get hurt.
So never believe in something someone says if you know it’s not true.
Cause you’re going to get hurt forever.
Going to have scars that last forever and you know it

Hold on hard in everything that means something
Cause someday you’re going to lose it.
Lose it all.
Lose control.
Fucking lose control

You know that you can trust yourself.
Casue it’s your life
And don’t cry for someone that doesn’t deserve it.
Cause you know it’s not right.
So clean up your face and go on.
Go on and forget

kan nån tycka någoting? har fått höra av min kompis att dom är bra men jag undrar vad någon annan tycker

Jag diggar't! Har ingen direkt kritik, mer än att du skrivit "are I'm" i första. Det borde vara "am I" :>

tack märkte inte det

Tack det blir alltid små fel när jag skriver

^ Det blir det nog för de flesta

To be perfect
In this world is everything about to be perfect.
To be accepted.
To be strong so you can hold up everything.
But that’s not easy to hold tougher.
And everything that I want you know that I do anything to make things right.
But I fail every time even how hard I even try

To live on the other side
Live like in a magazine.
To be rich, to be loved
To live like the happy stories that you read about.
To live like in a fucking fairy tale.
To be happy all the time.

If you think that I can be perfect.
So shall you know that to do everything to please you.
I open whole my heart you make you happy.
But you just want everything to be perfect

To live on the other side
Live like in a magazine.
To be rich, to be loved
To live like the happy stories that you read about.
To live like in a fucking fairy tale.
To be happy all the time.

It’s impossible to live here if everything is perfect
It’s always something wrong that I do.
I know that I can’t be perfect
But I do all that I can do.
Everyone those mistakes sometimes

vad tycks?

To be embraced, to be loved to feel the secure.
It was years ago I felt that way.
When I knew you were there.
You where always there when I cried.
I was young when you left my side.
I was hurt and scared.
I didn’t know what to do

How am I gonna do this?
How am I gonna trust?
Why am I alone in this world?
I was scared when you left.
I didn’t know anything.
Cause I was to young

I did think I meant everything or you.
What the hell did I do to you.
You did know that you hurt me.
But you didn’t care
Cause you’re mean and cruel
You don’t give a skit what someone else thinks

How am I gonna do this?
How am I gonna trust?
Why am I alone in this world?
I was scared when you left.
I didn’t know anything.
Cause I was to young

Everyone else think you’re nice and so.
But when it’s just me and you are you someone else
You don’t have emotions you don’t care.
It’s all about you.
You think you don’t have done something when I am hurt as the most.
I cry my soul out every day
cause of you

vad tycker ni?

en låt som en del e inspirerad av mina "underbara" föräldrar

I’m not an angel I’m not a saint.
I’m not the girl that you think I am
I am not going to walk in a dress and act nice and all that shit.
I’m not under your control.
I can break your teeth I can break it all.
Don’t cry when you’re down on the floor.
When you’re bleeding and your scars are deep.

Hit it, crash it
Make it loud.
I want to hear your scream in pain.
I don’t going to stop till your dead.
I want to see your face when you crying
I want to see your eyes when you’re screaming

When you said I was your little girl
Did I feel the sting and the anger in me.
I just wanted to scream in your face.
I’m not yours and I never will be.
You’re just nothing and it always will be so.
You’re just a loser in a loser town.
You have said shit to me.
Like you never going to be something.
You just suck on everything.
I hate fucking hate you.
How could you always be like that?

Hit it, crash it.
Make it loud.
I want to hear your scream in pain.
I don’t going to stop till your dead.
I want to see your face when you crying.
I want to see your eyes when you’re screaming

The word I heard before like I love you.
Doesn’t mean anything now
You made me hurt and broken just want to see you hurt.
Hurt and crying like you made me do.
Lose control and lose it all.

vad tycker ni? jag tål kritik (men beröm vore ju inteså dålig )

okej jag behövde värkligen skriva ut mig på nått sätt. för att mina själmordstankar och min döttslängtan har kommit tillbaka igen

All this years I wonder why am I still here?
All this hate that’s existing in this world.
Why am I here?
I never wanted to be here.
Cause all of that screaming.
I can’t take it more.

Why is it like this?
I want away from this place.
Cause of all pain that existing
Why can’t I fly away?
Just leave
I don’t want to be hurt anymore
I want away right now
Why does it go so slow?

I just want the secure.
I tried it all.
I don’t belong here
All that I want to leave
Just say goodbye and leave

I can’t take all this
Why don’t I get to leave now?
I want away from this world
Cause I don’t mean anything
I just a little shit that no one cares about

I just want to die
Fast and painless
No one would even care.
Why is it like this?
Why isn’t it like all this happy stories you read?
I’m just a big mistake.

So I want to say goodbye
And leave it after that
But questions running in my head.
Why am I here?
What am I doing here

säg gärna vad ni tycker

^ Jag gillar den!
tycker du skriver på ett bra sätt, men du behöver nog jobba lite på gramatiken bara. Men har för mig att du är ganska ung(13?), du lär dig med åren Jag var inte så bra på engelska som du när jag var 13 kan jag säga.
Keep up the good work

Tack jag ska bli 14. hehe vet att jag behöver öva på min gramatik vi hade bara engelska första delen av året (till jul lovet) sen så har vi bara haft vikarier. men dom hjälpte ju inget för vi skrämde iväg alla vi hade.
hade dom max 2 gånger (stökigaste klassen på skolan typ)

Jättebra skrivet! Lite grammatiksfel här och där dock men det är inte mycket.