Ni får ursäkta stavfel och gramatiskafel och att texten inte är bra... alls. Men jag kan skylla på min ålder.. Jag fyller 14 så jag är liiten jämfört med många här. Anywho... jag skriver för att inte slå sönder saker. De funker lite gran men inget blir direkt jätte bra men... Nu svamlar jag igen. Sorry


You’ll be in my mind both day and night
But I will never hold you tight
I aint goanna walk around pretend I do
I aint like you
Cause every moment I see your face
I think back on our happy days
That makes me wanna see you bleed
So you will understand how I feel

I should sue you for destroying my life
With your bare cold hands and fake smile
I should shoot you for taking me down
Burned my skin, that you took me down
To hell.

Hating you is a 24/7 deal
I almost takes my shit for real
You’re gonna die there’s no doubt
But you’re a bitch that gonna fizzle out
And when you do, I gonna laugh at you
I gonna play this song
I gonna scream your name
I gonna cut you up and make sure you shut up

I gonna sue you for destroying my life
With your bare cold hands and fake smile
I gonna shoot you for taking me down
Fucked me up, that you took me down
To hell.

Facing you
Facing me
Face my family
Facing truth
Facing Hell
And you break my shell
Facing rocks
Breaking shields
Now do you know how I feel?
You’re a jerk
You’re fat
Loves you less then a rat
Everyone
‘round here
Thinks you made out of steel
You push your
Friends away
And you’re surprised you’re ‘lone?

Nice!
Btw, jag är tolv ^^

Väldigt bra:)

Jag har en kompis som stämmer in ganska bra på den texten.

Den var väldigt bra! Jag har också en eller flera "kompisar" som stämmer in precis på den texten och hur de får mig att känna!
Du har verkligen talang!

Jamen tack då ^^
Jo den handlar om en "kompis".

Talang? Jo man tackar! : D

Bra skrivet!

Än en gång ursäkta för alla möjliga fel och dålig text (:

I’ve been on your street a million times
Aint telling if I did crimes
I don’t regret it, anymore
I won’t forget it, thats for sure
I don't want you back on your street again
But I've seen you a million times sins then

I don’t like the truth
Or what it’s telling
Five more seconds then I´m dead
Screaming out your lies
To Glued eyes
And Fish skies

Tries to remember why I liked you boy
Can’t come up with a thing I’m out of joy
I cried for hours
Like a million showers
I wasted every thoughts and tear
The thing in your eye is fucking fear

I don’t like the truth
Or what it’s telling
Five more seconds then I´m dead
Screaming out your lies
To Glued eyes
And Fish skies

I wanna brand your back
But I love you to much
You were a good friend you chump
But why do you think we’re some garbage dump?
Are we just tools in your game?
Or a road you walk on to fame?
I really don’t know anymore
I’ve never been so insecure.

I don’t like the truth
Or what it’s telling
Five more seconds then I´m dead
Screaming out your lies
To Glued eyes
And Fish skies

Jag blir impad av hur många här som är runt 14 och klarar av att skriva bra texter. Great!

Du är verkligen duktig!

Keep up the good work

Nåt jag slängde ihop när jag insåg hur jävla mycke jag glömmer att jag älskar stället som jag vill bort från. Och att jag insåg att när jag har kommit bort härifrån blir allt bättre...

Forgetting time
Forget to live
Forgetting hope
Forgetting trust
Forgetting school
Forgetting friends
So this might be my end

Forgetting me
Forgetting you
I hope forgetting all the shit I’ve been trough
Forgetting faces
Forgetting hunger
Leaving places
Even the bright one I love to

My mental health is chasing peace in my mind
War is coming down
Just can’t eas my mind
I struggle with the bad and losing good
Rest in my soul would make me great
Unbelievable private suicide
I don´t feel for heaven, won’t give hell a try
I wanna go where I belong
I wanna go where I’m welcome
I gonna go to people that understands
They don’t feel me but they’ll hold my hand
When I’m dead inside
Cause I won’t forget me so slow
And I will remember why I here
And I will forget all the fear

As bra!^^

En snabb skriven... dock långt i från klar men de är en början. Eller ett slut. Vem vet?

I can’t let my past go
I can’t se my future
It’s never to late to hurt someone
It’s never time to say “ I’m sorry ”
I’ve never got time to whine
I hide my problems in broken time
I never have minutes to think
So I stare too much over the brink

I’ve won the battle but I’ve lost the war
My head spinning the same three chord
Concentration lack in my brain
Infections that making me insane