Jag brukar skriva en del låttexter och även rita ibland. Tänkte lägga ut mina kreativa verk här och se vad ni tycker. Vet inte om de är nåt vidare bra, men iaf. Kom gärna med konstruktiv kritik!

Börjar med en låttext:

Walk my way

What’s the matter with the world today?
You must be just like everyone else
I see you live without being alive for real
You don’t say what you think
Don’t think at all
How does it feel?
Just sit behind a desk and work all day long

Hey, I wanna walk my way
I don’t wanna be an invisible face in the crowd
I won’t care about what you say
I will always be loud and proud
Think what you want about me
No one can ever change me
Cause I wanna walk my way

This big, silly race makes me sick
It’s all about money and trends
To be cool you must listen to the right music
And hang with the right friends
That doesn’t sound cool to me
It’s cool is to stand up for the person you are
Don’t sacrifice yourself for who others want you to be

What’s your goal? To lose your soul?
It isn’t easy to be yourself
But you got to try
Put your pride on the shelf
Whatever is better than living in a lie

Okej, here comes another one. Vet att det är lite emo-varning på den här, men skitsamma. Kommentarer uppskattas.

Take me away tonight

Tonight my soul is darker
Than the black sky outside
I’m sitting alone in my room
Alone with all these stupid thoughts
It’s quiet here, but I’m screaming inside

To be or not to be
That’s the question
Suicide is my sad suggestion
All I want is to get away from this pain
Cause it drives me so insane

I’ve felt like this so many times before
Tonight it feels I can’t take it one minute more

Can you help me to dry my tears?
I don’t know how
There’s so many problems and fears
I got to solve them, somehow
Can you make me feel alright?
I would do anything
If someone could take me away tonight

This evening I can’t see the stars
They used to shine so bright
I see lots of cars
I wanna jump out this night
But I’ll never stop the fight

Cause I’ve got something worth fighting for
Maybe I can take this shit a little bit more

Tack tack!! Roligt att du gillar dem. Ja det har jag, någolunda iaf, men har inga bra inspelningar än. ^^ När jag fixat det kan jag lägga upp så ni får höra. Tills dess får ni nöja er med texterna.

En jag nyligen skrivit till en av mina bästa vänner:

She’s one of a kind

I know a girl
A girl not like anyone else
You’ve got to search madly to find
Someone so reliable, special and kind

I’ve never met her
But she always makes me feel better
With every letter she writes to me
Every word just seems to be magic

No one is like her, oh no
I’m so glad I’ve found her
I won’t ever let her go
I know she won’t let me down
The only one who always accept me for who I am
Cause she’s one
One of a kind

She’s 100 miles away
Still she seems so near
In my heart she’ll stay
She can take away every tear and fear

She’s my friend
My best friend
Dear soulmate
I hope our friendship will last til the end

naww<33 fan vad fin <33

Tack så mkt!

Jättebra!

Tack BJ!

Idag skrev jag en dikt till ett skolarbete om poesi som jag blev riktigt nöjd med, here it is:

Dwell on dreams

Imagine what it’s like to be free
Like the cheerful dolphin in the ocean
Like the beautiful eagle over the sea
Still you’re stuck on the ground
Freedom will never be found
In your dreams only
You’ll be free

Imagine what it’s like to be glad
Like your happy memories never end
Like you’re laughing until death with a friend
Still you’re stuck in the dark
Trying to find a happiness spark
In your dreams only
You’ll be glad

Imagine what it’s like to never be alone
Like you’re always loved
Like no one would leave you on your own
Still you exist in loneliness
Bad luck when you played life’s chess?
In your dreams only
You’ll never be alone

Real life is harder than made up dreams
But don’t try to run away
You’ll lose so much if you don’t stay
In reality
Someday you may be
Never alone, glad and free
My friend, just wait and see
A life can’t be perfect
Neither are we
As the wise man said
Better live before we’re dead
And my soul screams
As far as it seems
There’s no meaning dwell on dreams

Den var oerhört bra! Keep it up! ;)

Tack så mkt Bea och Hanna!! Ja, det ska jag göra.

men oh my lord!!! dra mej baklänges!!:D du är ju superduktig, speciellt "gillar" (underdrift) jag din dikt, den senaste:P
superbra, fortsätt så!!:D

Åh vad snäll du är RebeCka, blev jätteglad när jag läste ditt inlägg!! Tack så jättemkt. Verkligen kul att du gillar det jag skrivit, jag är också speciellt nöjd med den sista faktiskt.

Nu har jag blivit klar med ytterligare en dikt/låttext, som vanligt uppskattas kritik och synpunkter.

Sometimes great memories are the worst

You made me the world’s happiest person one day
You really treated me like you felt the same
The next one you blew my heart and mind away
Now you think I’m the one to blame

What we did means nothing you say
For me fortune never seems to come
I must try to hold on to a better day
I really thought we would have some

Feeling so empty inside
Wish I had never been cursed
Remember all good times with you beside
Sometimes great memories are the worst

We shall still be friends you say
Now you just don’t seem to care
It isn’t the same it used to be today
I have tried, but now I despair

I wanna know how you feel
You just don’t seem to understand
Don’t you think I am for real?
While our memories fade out in the sand

Wow, du skriver verkligen jätte bra! Det är något jag inte riktigt kan sätta fingret på som gör att jag fastnar för dina dikter/texter direkt. Jag kan helt ärligt säga att det flesta gånger jag tittat i underground konst-forumet läser jag bara kanske 1 text/tråd men jag läste alla dina och tycker om dem allihop. (:

Jätteroligt att höra att du gillar dem Erika (du hette så, right?) !

^Ja <: