Lite texter och så, kommentera gärna så jag vet vad som är bra och dåligt och allt som kan förbättras

I'm the one, you know who
The doomed and only one you knew
Walking through a land of madness
Walking here doomed to lonelyness

Fucking insomnia keeps me awake
But i'm still dreamin of a better place
A place without opression or war
Make it true and you'll be the real star

But it's to late to do anything now
And if, I keep wondering how
A dream of a better place is nice
When only a few got enough rice

Fucking insomnia keeps me awake
But i'm still dreamin of a better place
A place without opression or war
Make it true and you'll be the real star

The world you've totally destroyed
Is dissappearing, it's fucking spoiled
Can't keep thinking of that dream I have
A dream of a better world, Full of love

Gillar det!

tack tack ^

nice, keep it up

Great! Du är bra på att skriva och på engelska. En grej bara, det stavas only, inte onley. (Om du nu inte menar lonely och har missat l.et).

Hoppas nån gillar denna då, knåpade ihop den igår natt

My bitter tears isn't salted water anymore

Pure, red blood, i'm bleeding from my heart

Pure, red blood it's floweing through my veins

Not a human anymore, since we've been apart


Setting up everyone i meet with my attitude

I have to watch my mouth not to be that rude

Whatever I say, they might think it's crude

Just 'cause it's me, in a world without latitude


Talk to you but you don't seem to understand

What I say or what I do, tears down my face

My red blood is coloured black of my anger

Running away from you, in the morning haze



Setting up everyone i meet with my attitude

I have to watch my mouth not to be that rude

Whatever I say, they might think it's crude

Just 'cause it's me, in a world without latitude


Say what I think and proude of it ofcourse

Better know the truth then know everyone's lying

Hate to tell you but if you ask me i cant lie

Because of that easy principe i'm dying


Setting up everyone i meet with my attitude

I have to watch my mouth not to be that rude

Whatever I say, they might think it's crude

Just 'cause it's me, in a world without latitude

^Du är Grymm på att skriva tkr jag fortsätt så

Before you didn't worry a lot
you was curious about life
But nowadays you are not
What has happend, my friend?
Wont you know what life's got?

You slept underneath the stars
But then you never woke up
Your body did, but not your soul
You was'nt dead but wanted to

It was years ago i saw you smile
Now you suffer your life is bad
Pleas wake up from that dream
I can't last, see you this sad
'Cause you're the only friend i've got

You slept underneath the stars
But then you never woke up
Your body did, but not your soul
You was'nt dead but wanted to

I saw your suffering, all to late
Now you think I don't care 'bout you
But you're all wrong, i do care!
But I sure as hell dunno what to do!
Can just stand here screaming: i love you!

kommentera gärna =)